Feedback request!

Hey there, Squarespace fam!

I'm Ihab. Over the past year, I've spent quite some time creating [www.workplaceconsultant.com], a website for my consulting practice!

I'm originally not a web designer but I've given it my best shot in design and content, but an extra pair of eyes (or several) always helps!

• User Experience: Was it easy for you to navigate? Did you feel something was missing or out of place?
• Homepage Aesthetics: How did the design and layout vibe with you?
• And anything else you suggest or come accross!

I aim to target the following audiences:

• Folks wanting to know more about me or Workplace Consultant — potential clients, recruiters, HR maestros, or just curious individuals.
• Tech enthusiasts keen on diving deep into Microsoft SaaS and similar platforms.
• IT admins at companies looking for specific info, how to's etc. 

Here is a quick preview:

I am happy to return the favour by providing feedback to your site! 

Thanks

On 10/11/2023 at 5:50 PM, studiofounded said:

Hi @Ihab-Workplace!

Visitors should be able to visit your site and immediately understand what you do. I recommend developing the home page with more copy to describe what you offer, your brand story, your unique selling points, your specific services, etc. This will also support your SEO and help you be found easier! 

I would definitely add more information about your offer. Exactly what services do you provide?  What do costs/timeframes look like? Who do you work with? Who don't you work with?  Do you work in a specific location or remotely worldwide?

Lastly, I recommend adding the newsletter sign up to the home page so it's easy to find. Explain what subscribers will get from it — what value will your newsletter offer? You can incentive sign ups by offering a useful or exciting freebie in return for their email (for example, a 10-point guide on things business owners need to know about email security). 

Let me know if this helps!

— Hannah

Studio Founded

Thank you so much! I've taken your advice and currently working on a proper value proposition.