Feedback requested on my website

Hello everyone I am new to the Forum but not new to Squarespace,  my website has been up and running for over a year yet am really struggling to get anyone to buy any of my services.

Would anyone mind looking at my content to see if I could improve my marketing at all?  I have taken down my acuity scheduling to revamp so ignore that for now.

would appreciate advice on what company to use for attaching a sign up incentive to my page such as free offering.

www.holisticallyhealthywithrachelle.com

Any help would be greatly appreciated as extremely new to running a business Many thanks

Hi, 

Not a graphic designer or anything, but I am finding the text on your site very difficult to read - perhaps it is the spacing and size. The images in the recipe section are also very big. 

I always look at mobile first and design for the larger screens from there. When I first visit the main page of your website, I see the title of your website, and three images stacked on top of each other...and no introductory text at all. The photos do make sense with what you are trying to promote, but you could easily combine them into a gallery to bring some of your most important text above the fold on mobile (screenshot attached).

From there, and I don't mean to be blunt, but move the content about you to an "about" page. That's not necessary on a main page of a website. Below the newly added photo gallery, you should have text that explains your mission statement - what people can expect when browsing your website? How does buying one of your services improve their life? I know what holistically healthy means, but assume the average visitor to your website doesn't. Use persuasive text to get them to understand what it's about and why your services are important.

That's a good starting point to improve your main page. Also, I can't remember the setting for the cookies bar but it takes up way too much real estate on mobile. I would find a way to make that appear either further down the page or just do away with it all together until your website gets much more popular. Most people understand that websites use cookies, and If you press accept or decline, the banner just disappears regardless.