FinleyMatchmaker Posted October 24, 2019 Share Posted October 24, 2019 finleyintroductions.com Link to comment
colin.irwin Posted October 24, 2019 Share Posted October 24, 2019 I would lose the graphic text on your banner - it crops off screen on many screen sizes. tuanphan 1 I'm writing a date localiser plugin - Check out the proof of concept on YouTube and let me know what you think of it You might want to check out my Squarespace template finder Or have a look at my other Squarespace tips Looking for a Squarespace developer,? Book a chat or Drop me a line Link to comment
colin.irwin Posted October 24, 2019 Share Posted October 24, 2019 Your copy uses passive voice a lot. It tends to bury the meaning of sentences. There are also lots of long sentences that you should consider splitting up for easier screen reading. For instance Quote Protecting you and making your dreams a reality, bringing joy, fulfillment and quality companionship to you with people of integrity, that we have screened, is why we exist and why we bounce out of bed in the morning excited to do what we do best. Could be better with active voice. Quote We exist to make your dreams a reality. Our screening process protects you and brings joy, fulfillment and quality companionship with people of integrity. It's what makes us bounce out of bed in the morning excited to do what we do best. I'm writing a date localiser plugin - Check out the proof of concept on YouTube and let me know what you think of it You might want to check out my Squarespace template finder Or have a look at my other Squarespace tips Looking for a Squarespace developer,? Book a chat or Drop me a line Link to comment
colin.irwin Posted October 24, 2019 Share Posted October 24, 2019 ALL CAPS TEXT is more difficult for people to understand. Avoid using it in body copy. I'm writing a date localiser plugin - Check out the proof of concept on YouTube and let me know what you think of it You might want to check out my Squarespace template finder Or have a look at my other Squarespace tips Looking for a Squarespace developer,? Book a chat or Drop me a line Link to comment
henryjoh29 Posted April 27, 2021 Share Posted April 27, 2021 (edited) Overall your website is good looking but your logo is not transparent and it's large too and header height is too big it hurts user experience, if you need any suggestions just have a look on cheap motherboards under 100 and see how the logo is placed and header size. I hope you would improve your site and good luck. Edited April 8, 2022 by henryjoh29 Link to comment
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