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Your copy uses passive voice a lot. It tends to bury the meaning of sentences. There are also lots of long sentences that you should consider splitting up for easier screen reading.

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Protecting you and making your dreams a reality, bringing joy, fulfillment and quality companionship to you with people of integrity, that we have screened, is why we exist and why we bounce out of bed in the morning excited to do what we do best.

Could be better with active voice. 


We exist to make your dreams a reality. Our screening process protects you and brings joy, fulfillment and quality companionship with people of integrity. It's what makes us bounce out of bed in the morning excited to do what we do best.


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