annajimenez Posted July 23 Posted July 23 Hello! I just launched my website and would love to receive your feedback. https://www.therevenueteam.es/en/home Thank you in advance for your time!
JessicaM Posted July 24 Posted July 24 Hi @annajimenez! Nice images...and I like the angled corners...I haven't seen that look before. Here's a few things that caught my eye - - I just landed on the page, and without scrolling, I'm not really sure what this business does. It says "maximize your lodging's revenue"... but how? Do you renovate hotels? Do you do marketing for hotels? I would expand that sentence just a little more so that it's more clear. If people are confused, they'll leave. - Also, be sure to use really simple and clear words... like this - "we contribute to enhancing the tourism sector as a tool for local development" is a bunch of big words that just sound big, but not clear. - Be sure your text identifies the customer's problem... what problem do they have that led them to come to your site looking for the answer? You'll get more clients when you talk about their problems and how they feel now vs how they feel after working with you than you will if you just talk about what the business has to offer. - The green colors have this nice calming effect, but then that purple just jolts you out of your chair...it's a really bright color compared to the rest of the look and feel of the site. - When you scroll back up on the page, the top header is white, which means you can't see any of the links/button. see below - Hope that helps 🙂 Jessica Miller | Squarespace Website Designer https://www.jessicamiller.work jessica@jessicamiller.work Search the blog and get Squarespace tips to your inbox https://www.jessicamiller.work/blog Want to pick my brain or get help? Book a free 15 minute call. If my post solved your problem, please mark it as the solution - thanks!
annajimenez Posted July 25 Author Posted July 25 On 7/24/2024 at 6:58 PM, JessicaM said: Hi @annajimenez! Nice images...and I like the angled corners...I haven't seen that look before. Here's a few things that caught my eye - - I just landed on the page, and without scrolling, I'm not really sure what this business does. It says "maximize your lodging's revenue"... but how? Do you renovate hotels? Do you do marketing for hotels? I would expand that sentence just a little more so that it's more clear. If people are confused, they'll leave. - Also, be sure to use really simple and clear words... like this - "we contribute to enhancing the tourism sector as a tool for local development" is a bunch of big words that just sound big, but not clear. - Be sure your text identifies the customer's problem... what problem do they have that led them to come to your site looking for the answer? You'll get more clients when you talk about their problems and how they feel now vs how they feel after working with you than you will if you just talk about what the business has to offer. - The green colors have this nice calming effect, but then that purple just jolts you out of your chair...it's a really bright color compared to the rest of the look and feel of the site. - When you scroll back up on the page, the top header is white, which means you can't see any of the links/button. see below - Hope that helps 🙂 Hey Jessica, Thank you so much for your feedback! It's really helpful. I'll implement the suggestions to improve the website. I just have one question. Which browser and/or device did you use to check the website? I can't seem to replicate the white menu issue in Safari or Chrome. The menu is supposed to be dark green with white text (I attach you the image). Thanks again! 🙂 Anna
JessicaM Posted July 25 Posted July 25 1 hour ago, annajimenez said: Hey Jessica, Thank you so much for your feedback! It's really helpful. I'll implement the suggestions to improve the website. I just have one question. Which browser and/or device did you use to check the website? I can't seem to replicate the white menu issue in Safari or Chrome. The menu is supposed to be dark green with white text (I attach you the image). Thanks again! 🙂 Anna You're very welcome! Glad it was helpful 🙂 Most of the pages have the green header like your screenshot, but for some reason the 5 solutions at the top that are linked on this page have the white heading when you scroll back up. I'm using Firefox 🙂 Jessica Jessica Miller | Squarespace Website Designer https://www.jessicamiller.work jessica@jessicamiller.work Search the blog and get Squarespace tips to your inbox https://www.jessicamiller.work/blog Want to pick my brain or get help? Book a free 15 minute call. If my post solved your problem, please mark it as the solution - thanks!
tinango Posted August 12 Posted August 12 Hi @JessicaM! Great website. The website is loading slowly for me. Is this the same with you @annajimenez? Also could the text here be enhanced? I'm loving the cornered images! How did you do that?
annajimenez Posted August 15 Author Posted August 15 On 8/12/2024 at 3:52 AM, tinango said: Hi @JessicaM! Great website. The website is loading slowly for me. Is this the same with you @annajimenez? Also could the text here be enhanced? I'm loving the cornered images! How did you do that? Hello! No, it's loading correctly for me. Let's see if anyone else is experiencing the same issue, and I'll take a closer look. The images with rounded contours and diagonal cuts were edited in Photoshop and uploaded in PNG format with the minimum possible size. I believe that with Squarespace you can only round the edges but not create this specific shape. Thanks for your feedback!
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