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Hey @molliehiggi!

Nice logo! Here's some suggestions -

- I would remove the Home link in the top navigation (your logo takes people back to the home page).
- Adjust the margins of the page so that the text doesn't go all the way up to the edges on each side. It's too hard on people's eyes to read text that spans that much distance.
- I would build out the home page a little more... like, what people can expect by joining YPHA, testimonials of members, about, benefits, etc. The home page should sort of be an overview of what people will find on the rest of the site. You have a lot of pages, so just add some of that content to the home page and then link to that page.
- The "I want to get involved" button is huge!!
- Be sure the words in your URL's are separated by a hyphen for SEO (like, /become-a-member and not /becomeamember)
- Also the newsletter field kind of excludes anyone who is under 35, which is your target audience. I would just rephrase that sentence so that it's welcoming for anyone to sign up.
- Add more call to action buttons for people to sign up! Like, on the member benefits page, there should be a button under all of those benefits so that people can sign up.
- Check out the spacing on the Testimonails page - there's too much extra space under the form.
- Plants are one of the most gorgeous things out there... you could incorporate a lot more images of plants in the site design to make it visually appealing.

Hope that helps. Happy to answer any questions 🙂

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