JeffWeber Posted December 12, 2023 Posted December 12, 2023 (edited) Any feedback at all would be greatly appreciated. A designer, I am not. Overall thoughts on content are also welcome. 🙂 Site is here: www.orchestratedfiction.com Edited December 12, 2023 by JeffWeber
tuanphan Posted December 14, 2023 Posted December 14, 2023 I see banner image, took 2-3 seconds to load, you can consider compress it to increase load speed Email me if you have need any help (free, of course.). Answer within 24 hours. Or send to forum message Contact Customer Care - Learn CSS - Buy me a coffee (thank you!)
JeffWeber Posted December 14, 2023 Author Posted December 14, 2023 I updated all the images on my site to the recommended 500 KB or less. Would still love an other feedback anyone has. Especially on design and/or best practices that I might be missing.
JessicaM Posted December 15, 2023 Posted December 15, 2023 Hi @JeffWeber! Nice artwork and interesting concept. Update the favicon at the top with one that's unique to you instead of the default Squarespace. The About page and the Blog are the same info... I would just remove the Blog and keep About. The site loaded just fine for me, so decreasing the image sizes helped. I would remove the dates from the Stories page. People are sometimes quick to dismiss something that they consider 'old' (could be one week...or one month). By removing the dates, it keeps the content relevant and 'fresh'. Naming your images correctly and giving them alt tags will help to rank higher in Google. To name them, each word should be separated with a dash (this-is-a-picture.png instead of thisisapicture.png). You need a footer! You can include the links in the top nav in the footer and any contact info, social media, logo, etc. I would also consider adding a newsletter form so you can grow your email list. Here's a couple of blog posts that might be helpful. This one is part 1 in a series on blogging that you might find applicable to your Stories page. This other one is 13 Beginner Mistakes to Avoid (like the favicon) that you might find helpful. Feel free to holler back if you have questions. I'm happy to help. Jessica Miller | Squarespace Website Designer https://www.jessicamiller.work jessica@jessicamiller.work Search the blog and get Squarespace tips to your inbox https://www.jessicamiller.work/blog Want to pick my brain or get help? Book a free 15 minute call. If my post solved your problem, please mark it as the solution - thanks!
JeffWeber Posted December 16, 2023 Author Posted December 16, 2023 Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. I'll get to work incorporating your suggestions! Much appreciated. Â
JessicaM Posted December 16, 2023 Posted December 16, 2023 @JeffWeber You're welcome! 🙂 Jessica Miller | Squarespace Website Designer https://www.jessicamiller.work jessica@jessicamiller.work Search the blog and get Squarespace tips to your inbox https://www.jessicamiller.work/blog Want to pick my brain or get help? Book a free 15 minute call. If my post solved your problem, please mark it as the solution - thanks!
JeffWeber Posted December 16, 2023 Author Posted December 16, 2023 BTW, I decided to keep the About page and the Blog. The Blog will be used for posts about how I'm making the stories. The fist Welcome post will get pushed out as new posts come in so the duplication won't be so obvious. Thanks Again.
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