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Hi @keefe overall you've done a good job putting this all together and getting everything set up. There are a few things that in my opinion could be improved.

To be completely honest, I am finding a lot of the text very hard to read with the font colours, use of uppercase in long paragraphs, and background images.

I would recommend doing something with your logo as it's small and illegible.

It looks like you have some issues with blocks overlapping on tablet-sized screens, probably caused by blocks that are larger than necessary with images under the text blocks.

The scheduling looks like it works fine.

Overall I would suggest trying to simplify the design and text so that someone looking at your website understands quickly and effectively what you are offering.

I hope that is all constructive, and if you want any help, please let me know and I'll see what I can do.

Please like and upvote if my comments were helpful to you. Cheers!

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