Terry-Schilling Posted June 8, 2023 Posted June 8, 2023 (edited) I would much appreciate a little peer review of my web site. The purpose for the site? Firstly, to publish my cartoons to a larger audience. I'm the stay-at-home source of these cartoons as described on my About Us page. My big ambition is to attract the attention of a publisher who would be interesting in posting Casey's Day cartoons in their journal, magazine, etc. So I am hoping to achieve a professional looking and convenient-to-use web site. I am not actually looking for subscribers. Followers interested in seeing more of my cartoons would be very welcome. Commercial interest: Not a big goal. I may add a link to drop shipped swag. Edited June 8, 2023 by Terry-Schilling grmmer correction
Helloparkerg Posted June 9, 2023 Posted June 9, 2023 (edited) This is a great project and nice website. At a quick glance I just have a couple pieces of feedback. 1) I would consider moving some of the stories on your homepage either to a dedicated page or reduce the amount you have shared. 1.2) I would make it clear what that section is by adding a small headline above the image tiles and maybe a background colored shape different from the white background to anchor that section a bit more. 2) I’d space out the links in your navigation on mobile and I’d consider a different font for your body copy. A sans serif possibly. hope this helps 🙂 Edited June 9, 2023 by Helloparkerg
Terry-Schilling Posted June 9, 2023 Author Posted June 9, 2023 Thank you for your time and consideration.
Terry-Schilling Posted June 9, 2023 Author Posted June 9, 2023 Question for Circle Member. You refer to differing the font in the body copy. Does that merely refer to the body copy in my mobile version?
Terry-Schilling Posted June 9, 2023 Author Posted June 9, 2023 Question fro Helloparking. Above you refer to "moving some of the stories on your homepage". By "stores", are you referring to my intro paragraph or the cartoons below?
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