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Hi @Gert-Jan,

From the landing page, it isn't clear what the site is, or how to access it.

I clicked around on the page until I entered the site, but I recommend a button that says something like "enter site", or removing the landing page as I'm not sure it's adding value.

Once inside the site, I recommend making the grey text darker as it's difficult to read. The fade in style on the text is visually interesting, but it does make the content difficult to read and digest. I think a few images would help to break up the text and add more visual appeal!

Otherwise, the site is clean and I like the color scheme. I hope that's all clear — let me know if you have any questions!

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Hi Hana, 

As the landing page does not correspond anymore with the final design of the website I indeed think it is not adding value as you say. So I'll guess I will take it away for now. 

I take in account your comments about the text color. 

 

Thanks again for liking the color scheme and giving feedback 🙂 

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