AlanBryceGrossman Posted December 7, 2022 Share Posted December 7, 2022 I am promoting the recent release of my debut novel "Because of Rachel" which is now for sale on Amazon and most online book retaliers. I have created my website to provide information about my book and other adjunct information about me. I woiuld like input as to the content for its effectiveness and suggested improvements. The images are all my own. Thank you. Alan Bryce Grossman. alanbrycegrossman.com Link to comment
christyprice Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 Hi @AlanBryceGrossman. Congratulations on your novel release! A couple of things that might be helpful: Underlines on websites are a cue to the visitor that those are links. So I'd remove underlines on unlinked items. I'd shorten up your testimonial section on the homepage to remove the excess blank space at the bottom. I'm a fan of "white space" but it would be good to be balanced on the top and bottom. It looks like there's an error on your recaptcha for the newsletter block... you might just want to remove that unless you start getting spam submissions. Hope this helps! sayreambrosio 1 christyprice.com 🇺🇸 Austin, TX US ✅ Get my 100+ item Client Process Checklist for $17. 📔 Flourish Journal for Creative Entrepreneurs - 365 days of prompts 🎥 Watch Circle Live: Hello Income (feat. Christy Price and Jeremy Schwartz) 🎬 Watch It's Not Hard to Say Goodbye: Crafting Client Offboarding from Circle Day 2023 Link to comment
AlanBryceGrossman Posted December 22, 2022 Author Share Posted December 22, 2022 Thank you! Link to comment
sayreambrosio Posted December 27, 2022 Share Posted December 27, 2022 @AlanBryceGrossman I would make the image of the press release downloadable OR put the image in a lightbox. You can't read it because of the size. Sayre (I'm supposed to be writing probably, but here I am 🤣) Link to comment
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