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I am promoting the recent release of my debut novel "Because of Rachel" which is now for sale on Amazon  and most online book retaliers.  I have created my website to provide information about my book and other adjunct information about me.  I woiuld like input as to the content for its effectiveness and suggested improvements.  The images are all my own.

Thank you.  Alan Bryce Grossman.  alanbrycegrossman.com

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Hi @AlanBryceGrossman. Congratulations on your novel release!

A couple of things that might be helpful:

Underlines on websites are a cue to the visitor that those are links. So I'd remove underlines on unlinked items.

I'd shorten up your testimonial section on the homepage to remove the excess blank space at the bottom. I'm a fan of "white space" but it would be good to be balanced on the top and bottom.

It looks like there's an error on your recaptcha for the newsletter block... you might just want to remove that unless you start getting spam submissions.

Hope this helps!

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