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Site URL: https://www.lapaginadeauxi.com/

Hello everyone, I hope you are well.

I want to show you, it's a website I made for a friend.
I took a template (https://kester-demo-es.squarespace.com/?nochrome=true) and edited it with the resources that works for it.

The context: she is a graphic designer, illustrator and documenter. Use the web as a showcase for her work and soon we will enable a whiteboard tab. As she also does lettering, a separate business is the rental of her lettering boards.

I used the template and edited a few things. I hope you can give me suggestions on how to visually improve what you can to make it look better.

Greetings!
D.

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Hi! 

I have a few suggestions

The signs/words on the images are too big for the space, and they part the word in awkward places, maybe try making them smaller in size, or find a synonym that fits the space.

El banner que se mueve lo pondría con un fondo de color o colores y las letras en blanco

El logo que tienes como icono cuando se abre la página web (en la pestaña) se pierde por ser blanco, tal vez estaría bien que le pusieras un fondo de algún color, o bien cambiarlo a negro en lugar de blanco.

Saludos!

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