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First ever website! Would LOVE a review :)

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Site URL: https://www.lukmanipese.com/

Hello everyone, 

I like doing voiceovers as a hobby and I thought It's finally time to stop being shy and make a personal website so it's easy for people to find my stuff. 

I've tried to make it very personable as it's mostly for fun. I'd love any feedback/advice on the design. I'm super happy to make changes based on your thoughts as yous are the experts!




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This is great. I love it only took me a few seconds to understand what and who the site is for. Your personable touches make it very clear that you do the voice work and you are very approachable. If I were looking for a voiceover artist, this site would feel like a gift because it is very clear. I know where you are, I can hear your work, and I can contact you directly. If I could afford you, you would have the job!

One question - must the job be from London?  That is not clear and I am not sure what difference proximity makes. Plenty of Americans would love to use your voice. 

I could find incredibly picky things to say, but they would be trite and wouldn't make it better.

The one thing I think you should try is to recenter your photo on the first page - it should be centered on your face and not feature you t-shirt so much. The top of your head blends too well with the oval's curve, and your face takes up a mere quarter of the space.  I would like it better if I was looking in your face and eyes rather than the bottom of your chin. 

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