Feedback on my site : Coaching

Site URL: http://www.southerncross.me

hi , 

Could you provide feedback on my site : www.southerncross.me

Best, 

Malcolm

Malcolm,

Since you asked...the messages are somewhat mixed:

• Southern Cross Investments
• A long list of personal coaching topics (many of your competitors focus on just one or two of these)
• A mastermind group that seems to be more about leadership growth and sales
• Free retreat at a Christian community, serving organic food
• A financial status statement on the retreat page
• Lots of high-quality information about John Maxwell

Bottom line: what do you do? Why choose you, over many others? If you can answer those questions clearly on your home page, that would be a good start. Testimonials will also help a lot.

On 8/22/2021 at 1:58 PM, davemillman said:

Malcolm,

Since you asked...the messages are somewhat mixed:

• Southern Cross Investments
• A long list of personal coaching topics (many of your competitors focus on just one or two of these)
• A mastermind group that seems to be more about leadership growth and sales
• Free retreat at a Christian community, serving organic food
• A financial status statement on the retreat page
• Lots of high-quality information about John Maxwell

Bottom line: what do you do? Why choose you, over many others? If you can answer those questions clearly on your home page, that would be a good start. Testimonials will also help a lot.

I agree with @davemillman on this one. With the investment being so prominent I though immediately of an investment firm and not anything else that is going on with the site. It lacks a cohesive focus.

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