janandsusan Posted July 9, 2021 Share Posted July 9, 2021 Site URL: https://janandsusan.com Launched our new site — thoughts? Jan & Susan admin + designjanandsusan.com Link to comment
hasher22 Posted July 10, 2021 Share Posted July 10, 2021 (edited) Nice, clean site, my feedback: The top right icons and cart, make them bigger. Looks unbalanced with the left words Have a hover indicator with your nav bar, a change of colour, an underline animation, anything Same with "lets talk", "learn more" etc buttons The 4 links, have the words: "design, admin, about, contact" larger font size than the body. Give it some font size heiarchy Get rid of the transparent black background behind them, give it a cleaner look. The reader already knows its 4 separate items, no need to box them If you want to show the reader they are also links, animate them, have a hover effect About page: Even though the background has a black overlay, the picture typography/sign makes your "hardworking portlanders" hard to read at first glance. It looks busy and messy Portfolio link: Just curious.... as a website that advertises brand design packages.... why is your portfolio such a tiny link and no link in the nav bar for your portfolio? As a potential customer/client, I want to see your portfolio easily....... Your portfolio is your marketing tool, not your prices, or what you do, or your admin. Contact: possibly have icons on the left next to your email, number and location. I feel that having those 3 stacked ontop of each other doesn't make sense. If not icons, increase the spacing between them so it feels like its 3 separate items, not one item. Appointment button closer to the contact button: it's too spaced out Edited July 10, 2021 by hasher22 janandsusan 1 Link to comment
janandsusan Posted July 10, 2021 Author Share Posted July 10, 2021 thx @hasher22 — I can tell you put some time and attention into this, very helpful! making some changes now Jan & Susan admin + designjanandsusan.com Link to comment
Spark_Plugin Posted July 16, 2021 Share Posted July 16, 2021 The website looks nice in general!👍 Here are a few improvements: The size of some elements seems to be off. I would reduce the size of the h1 and the header logo, and slightly increase the size of the normal paragraph text. Nature images looks very nice, however, they don't reflect your business very well. For example, use some images of you making websites, or images with more people in it. - Rasmus Myhrberg, Founder of Spark Plugin Spark Plugin – The Ultimate Design Toolkit for Squarespace Link to comment
janandsusan Posted July 16, 2021 Author Share Posted July 16, 2021 Thx @Spark_plugin for the feedback — we're continuing to edit and update. The images are city landmarks in and around Portland — an identity we want to keep — preferring not to have the more familiar image of someone working at a computer, etc. Appreciate the input! Spark_Plugin 1 Jan & Susan admin + designjanandsusan.com Link to comment
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