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Review on a site with an irreverent, informal tone


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  • Susana_SQSP changed the title to Review on a site with an irreverent, informal tone

It's too bright! Maybe it's just the fact that I'm still drinking my coffee this morning, but the very loud yellow is too much for me. It's attention-getting, yes; but then once I see it all I want to do is look way.

Sorry I can't be more positive, but I really can't focus on it to see anything beyond the loud. But then, for what it's worth, I strongly doubt that I'm at all representative of your target audience.

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On 2/5/2021 at 12:12 PM, girldad said:

It's too bright! Maybe it's just the fact that I'm still drinking my coffee this morning, but the very loud yellow is too much for me. It's attention-getting, yes; but then once I see it all I want to do is look way.

Sorry I can't be more positive, but I really can't focus on it to see anything beyond the loud. But then, for what it's worth, I strongly doubt that I'm at all representative of your target audience.

Thanks @girldad, appreciate you taking the time to respond. To be honest, I'm still a little torn myself; some days even I think it's too bright, but other days I really like it. 

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3 hours ago, CubeSquared said:

Thanks @joequint , appreciate you taking the time. I did deliberately limit the amount of text; still too much you think?

no offense but a little, yes. i'd love to see some images there... a nice job overall, to be sure.

 

3 hours ago, CubeSquared said:

Thanks @joequint , appreciate you taking the time. I did deliberately limit the amount of text; still too much you think?

 

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On 2/23/2021 at 1:24 PM, pogiroheat said:

if anyone has some time and fancy reviewing a site for me, Id love to hear from you.

Hey Pogiroheat, thought I'd take a quick look and give you some feedback. Obviously it's fairly basic but a couple of things to note. The dates on the blogs conflict with the titles which looks a little jarring. For me, it's missing some context, maybe an About Us page would be good to explain what you do and what customers can achieve. I see there's a link for one in the footer but it doesn't link to anything. The wording also seems a little haphazard in terms of capitalisation. Much of it is capitalised for no reason which makes it harder to read. Hope that helps.

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On 2/23/2021 at 8:24 AM, pogiroheat said:

if anyone has some time and fancy reviewing a site for me, Id love to hear from you.

First off I am a bit disappointed that yours is a wordpress Site. This is a squarespace users and builders help forum, but you have had some responses so I will leave it up. Who knows you might want to consider moving to Squarespace. 

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