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What are your thoughts on my redesign for my company's website?


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Hi everyone,

Hope you all are doing well. I am redesigning my company's website in SquareSpace. First time user here.  I am worried about if my design is good or not. So, I just wanted to solicit feedback on the design from you all and see what your thoughts and suggestions are. Thank you much. Look forward to hearing from you. 

 

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20 minutes ago, GeorgeWilliam2020 said:

Site URL: https://h2o-beta2020.squarespace.com/

Hi everyone,

Hope you all are doing well. I am redesigning my company's website in SquareSpace. First time user here.  I am worried about if my design is good or not. So, I just wanted to solicit feedback on the design from you all and see what your thoughts and suggestions are. Thank you much. Look forward to hearing from you. 

 

I think the site is excellent.  Well done.  I am also considering redesigning my SquareSpace site.  What template did you start with?

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1 hour ago, GeorgeWilliam2020 said:

I just wanted to solicit feedback on the design

Nice clean site! 🙂 Well done!

Hello I'm Thomas. I've been getting websites up and running for 26 years. I want to help you at whatever level meets your needs, from as little (if you're a DIYer) to as much as you need.

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One suggestion I would have is regarding your "above the fold" copy.

 

"Above the fold" being what we see as soon as the page loads and there hasn't been any scrolling, "Together We are H20" etc.

Make it more benefit focused. What is the problem you're solving, and why would someone use your service over someone else's?

E.g. Instead of "Making a splash"... it would be more towards your unique value proposition e.g. "Weekly waste removal that won't break your bank account and you won't even realize we're there"

 

Or something. 

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