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Would greatly appreciate feedback on my Lead Magnet/Website

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Site URL: https://bustacreative.com/

Hi Everyone, 

I've not been active in posting but I've been very fortunate to find a lot of help and answers here. It's quite a privilege to share in such a great community. 

I just relocated from Guam to Tucson Arizona. From beaches to the desert. Big change, I know. 

I have been preparing to relaunch my photography services in my new home and would greatly appreciate your feedback if you have any. 

This will be the first time I am implementing a lead magnet strategy and I was curious to know if your feedback on the potential effectiveness of what has been created already. 

I would be glad to hear any constructive critique. Thank you so much!

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I like it, nice use of the Brine Template, I think parallax scrolling adds a nice touch. Its a good site, I think I would like to see a way to get back to your homepage  from the free gifts page.   I also think you need to say what you are, a phogotgrapher a bit earlier on your home page, I had to scroll down a bit to see that. Your logo doesn't say either. I may be a bit more critical than some, because I am a photographer as well, not professionally, like my daughter is, my background was news and television, I was a cameraman, videographer, I guess they call it now.   I still shoot images mostly for use on website. I was one of the admins for Sony's Digital photography FB page for a number of years and yes I shoot with Sony SLTs, I have two of them an a57 and an a77II, started out some ten years ago with an a100. 

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Somewhere on the top of your page, maybe under the logo put the word photographer or photography. Make it easy for folks to get to any part of your site from any other part, no one likes to feel stuck.  That's about it. Overall it is a very creative site, nice images, the cellphone frames are a nice touch. 

Derrick.

https://myrandomviews.com/

 and for something to look at here is my daughter's site. She is also a Sony Shooter an A99.

https://christinegregoryphotography.com/

 

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