cmarzarella 3 Share Posted April 18, 2020 Site URL: https://www.marzarellafitness.com Hi folks, I would appreciate any feedback to my site, good or bad. I have thick skin. Please be honest. If it sucks just tell me why. Thank you very much. YourePerfect 1 Link to post
Muouor 2 Share Posted April 19, 2020 Hi. I think you really have to invest in good photography. Another thing is you have a lot of empty space between the text, a lot of scrolling. And too much difference between the font sizes. I think you have to replace the big logo on the front page to a simple and straight message to your customers with a good picture in the background. The message could be what you can offer to them to improve their lives. Forget about the logo does not add anything. Regards RasmusM and cmarzarella 2 Link to post
YourePerfect 19 Share Posted April 25, 2020 The initial screen with the logo looks great to me. I like the way it has the logo big and the menu at the top, personally. Scrolling down though... I do like the black and yellow. I think there is too much on the front page. I would move Staff, Testimonials, Values, Services, etc to other pages given the design choice of the big logo with clear menu at the top of the page. I personally would keep the big logo, and reduce the first page to about 1/4 (or maybe 1/6) of its current length. You have a mix of really nice photos and really low quality photos Good use of "call to action" buttons The styling on the main page feels kind of random, how each section has a different style. Its as though you were experimenting with different layouts to see what you like. For me, #1 thing to improve is the very large, low quality photos. But I'm a photographer so I notice that sort of thing! cmarzarella 1 Link to post
cmarzarella 3 Author Share Posted April 27, 2020 On 4/19/2020 at 2:03 PM, Muouor said: Hi. I think you really have to invest in good photography. Another thing is you have a lot of empty space between the text, a lot of scrolling. And too much difference between the font sizes. I think you have to replace the big logo on the front page to a simple and straight message to your customers with a good picture in the background. The message could be what you can offer to them to improve their lives. Forget about the logo does not add anything. Regards Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, I cant do much about the lower quality photos. There's some photos in it from over 15 years ago. I will be replacing some of the older ones with iPhone 11 Pro photos in the months to come. For now, this is the best I can do. I'm on the fence with the logo. I am going to consider your thoughts. As for the scrolling, I fixed it by adding a back to the top button. Thank you again. Link to post
cmarzarella 3 Author Share Posted April 27, 2020 On 4/25/2020 at 4:26 PM, YourePerfect said: The initial screen with the logo looks great to me. I like the way it has the logo big and the menu at the top, personally. Scrolling down though... I do like the black and yellow. I think there is too much on the front page. I would move Staff, Testimonials, Values, Services, etc to other pages given the design choice of the big logo with clear menu at the top of the page. I personally would keep the big logo, and reduce the first page to about 1/4 (or maybe 1/6) of its current length. You have a mix of really nice photos and really low quality photos Good use of "call to action" buttons The styling on the main page feels kind of random, how each section has a different style. Its as though you were experimenting with different layouts to see what you like. For me, #1 thing to improve is the very large, low quality photos. But I'm a photographer so I notice that sort of thing! I'm playing with moving the testomonials to another page, and services. The styling colors are my gym colors, charcoal black, gold, and white. Not much I can do about that, as I've been using those colors for years. When you say layouts, what would you suggest the layout should be? Link to post
YourePerfect 19 Share Posted April 27, 2020 13 hours ago, cmarzarella said: The styling colors are my gym colors, charcoal black, gold, and white. Not much I can do about that, as I've been using those colors for years. Oh, I was saying I think those colors look great. cmarzarella 1 Link to post
cmarzarella 3 Author Share Posted April 28, 2020 My apologies I missed that. Thank you. On 4/27/2020 at 11:16 AM, YourePerfect said: Oh, I was saying I think those colors look great. YourePerfect 1 Link to post
ruinay645 0 Share Posted March 1 (edited) yes I just watched the site for which you want feedback its very interesting and very good managedwebsite I gave some positive feedbacks thee I am also working on the similar field websites. Edited March 4 by ruinay645 Link to post
cmarzarella 3 Author Share Posted March 1 11 hours ago, ruinay645 said: yes I just watched the site for which you want feedback its very interesting and very good managed website I gave some positive feedbacks thee I am also working on the similar field websites. I would love any feedback now that I have made some changes. Link to post
RasmusM 20 Share Posted Tuesday at 06:06 AM Nice website! I like the typography, it fits well with the purpose. Also, spacing and layout looks great😊 This is what I would improve: As someone else said, some of the images are very low resolution. I use Let's Enhance to increase resolution, you can try it here: https://letsenhance.io "DID YOU SEARCH “PERSONAL TRAINERS NEAR ME”?" This text is a bit weird so I would change it to something else. Or do most of your visitors come from this search term? 🙋♂️ Maker of Spark (sparkplugin.com), a plugin to get superpowers in Squarespace Link to post
RasmusM 20 Share Posted Tuesday at 06:07 AM 21 hours ago, yeras43 said: yes its amazing to see your refreshed website for which you want feedback and I am also working on the similar topic and need your help as senior. If you add a new topic in "Feedback on Your Site", we can take a look at it😊 🙋♂️ Maker of Spark (sparkplugin.com), a plugin to get superpowers in Squarespace Link to post
cmarzarella 3 Author Share Posted Wednesday at 11:44 AM On 4/20/2021 at 2:06 AM, RasmusM said: Nice website! I like the typography, it fits well with the purpose. Also, spacing and layout looks great😊 This is what I would improve: As someone else said, some of the images are very low resolution. I use Let's Enhance to increase resolution, you can try it here: https://letsenhance.io "DID YOU SEARCH “PERSONAL TRAINERS NEAR ME”?" This text is a bit weird so I would change it to something else. Or do most of your visitors come from this search term? Trainers near me is a term that is used frequently. Is it too in your face for SEO? I have been thinking about that. I am in the middle of getting a video done (documentary/commercial) and I will probably be changing the front page anyway. I’ll probably leave the SEO in the “back office” of the page. It has been pretty successful. I will delete those low resolution pictures soon and replace them with newly updated higher resolution photos. Some I will keep and use that link you mentioned. Thanks for the helpful input. I appreciate it. RasmusM 1 Link to post
cmarzarella 3 Author Share Posted 16 hours ago On 4/20/2021 at 2:06 AM, RasmusM said: Nice website! I like the typography, it fits well with the purpose. Also, spacing and layout looks great😊 This is what I would improve: As someone else said, some of the images are very low resolution. I use Let's Enhance to increase resolution, you can try it here: https://letsenhance.io Your idea for increasing resolution was really good. I re-ehanced a bunch of photos from a long time ago. They look great. Link to post
RasmusM 20 Share Posted 14 hours ago @cmarzarella Glad I could help😊 🙋♂️ Maker of Spark (sparkplugin.com), a plugin to get superpowers in Squarespace Link to post
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