akorbiel Posted April 12, 2020 Share Posted April 12, 2020 Site URL: http://www.arthurkorbielphotography.ca Would like to receive a site critique in order to make it better. Thanks Link to comment
Carly1996 Posted April 14, 2020 Share Posted April 14, 2020 If you want a full critique I'd love to do one over zoom, it is much easier to go into detail that way 🙂 There are lots of suggestions I have for you throughout your site! (info@carlyhillphoto.com) Link to comment
NorthVisual Posted April 16, 2020 Share Posted April 16, 2020 Looks nice but I'm not a fan of the filters over the photographs. The home page banner image (and all banner images) should be brighter and cropped to focus on the bride and groom when the page opens - this is the first impression that a viewer will have of your work. The signature on the images is grand but I would suggest removing the semi-opaque band, it takes up too much visual dominance of the photos and confuses the composition. Some of the photos are gorgeous, I would suggest putting them on the home page, the current photos are great but don't forget - weddings are for the bride so, I would suggest featuring females front and centre on the HP and pushing the current ones down a bit. The home page bio could be shortened to one sentence and the full bio placed on another page. There could be a couple of short testimonials aswell. If a potential client is looking for a wedding photographer, they may have 20 or 30 to go through, your home page may only get a couple of seconds to impress them. You have plenty of supporting information which is great - no issues there. I hope this helps. N Link to comment
derricksrandomviews Posted April 16, 2020 Share Posted April 16, 2020 Looks very good, looks like Brine but I suspect its a 7.1 with code to use parallax scrolling which I am a fan of. Can't use it on my personal site but I have it other places. Link to comment
YourePerfect Posted April 27, 2020 Share Posted April 27, 2020 Its clean, straightforward, and you make great use of your original photography throughout the site. I think it does a good job on conveying the type of work you do. Link to comment
iyersloft-space Posted April 29, 2020 Share Posted April 29, 2020 Your site design tells your story...love your work. I second NorthVisuals feedback on "cropped to focus on the bride and groom when the page opens - this is the first impression that a viewer will have of your work". All the best wish you every success. Cheers... Link to comment
SiteFlame Posted May 4, 2020 Share Posted May 4, 2020 Nice site! I would give 2 pieces of feedback. 1- Make your logo about 50% smaller, that will tighten up the main navigation and make the website look more professional. It will also help fix the issue on smaller screens where the book now button falls below the other nav items. Example attached 🙂 2- See if you can reduce the height of the images on your internal pages to bring the content up a bit higher. It just tightens things up a little and lets some of those users out there who get confused easily know there is content they can scroll to. But this one is a take it or leave it. Link to comment
jentagenyc Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 Great site, simple and clean, good font choice. I would just reduce the site logo a bit. Link to comment
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