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DOBS

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  1. Hi Naz,

    I love the art you're making! To try to answer your question, and perhaps clarify what the person above said, I think you can do more to explain what the product you're offering is.

    I'll admit, I couldn't really tell what you are selling when I first look at the landing page. After looking around a bit (and from reading the post above), I realized that you combine paint and wood to craft unique pieces. I might not be your target audience, which is why I didn't understand what the product is.

    I think what could be improved is moving the story about your products to the first page of the website. It's great that you have the different collections listed along with a "Shop Now" button/call-to-action. It's clear and direct. However, before I click that button, I think adding a short line about the product as a subheading would be really helpful.

    Or, if you feel that would add too much text to read, add a paragraph about the products you're selling to the top. Basically, the concept is that you introduce the viewer to what you're selling, then tell them how to buy it.

    I hope that's helpful!

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